Wednesday, 20 September 2017

Storyline

Story line idea


Beginning: Character enters the room wearing a suit and tie. His boss scolds him and asks him why he's late to which the character apologises. The boss slams the document onto a table where Character is sat down with 3 other workers. The boss explains that there's been numerous murder cases in the past 3 weeks and then one of the workers opens the documents, viewing the contents inside which shows all the recent victims and their details. The team then start discussing any possible clues or how they can find the murderer. Character notes that all the murders have happened on an odd number in terms of dates but the others don't take him seriously and ignore him. They later then pack up and dismiss the meeting.

Middle: Character is seen walking home as one of the works catches up to him and they start to discuss how terrible the past 3 weeks have been. The worker then describes how his mother is one of the victim which shocks Character. They then part ways and the character carries on walking until he checks his phone for the time and date (11:40pm, 20th December) The scene then switches to inside their work business showing the boss packing up his bags.and beginning to head out. He thinks to himself "Wow it's 12 already" before suddenly the lights turn off. The boss starts panicking and shouts can be heard saying who are you, help. The lights flicker on for a second showing a shadow figure stood while the boss is one the floor then the lights flicker back on. Character is awaken by a phone call from his workers panicking "where have you been? Come to the office right away hurry up!" The character quickly gets up in a rush and gets dressed, heading out the door right away. He arrives at the work office where one of the worker scolds him for being late again. The rest of the team explain to Character that the boss was murdered last night and Character stares in shock. He brings up the fact that its happened on an Odd day again which the others blast him and to take this more seriously. One of the people question where's hes been as they've been trying to call him all day yesterday and this morning. Character simply responds that he was sleeping and more tired than usually for some reason. The others look at him shaking their heads and explain to them that the police are now involved in this and tell him to not miss the next meeting as they head out.

Ending: The character is seen walking home again at night time wondering to himself who could do such a terrible thing. He then checks his phone again and sees that it's 11:58pm 22nd December. Suddenly, he holds his head in pain and agony and crawls to an alleyway gasping for air. Meanwhile a clock is shown at 11:59 counting down to 12am, while this is happening, Character is seen being mentally torn apart and tearing off his clothes illustrating flashbacks of the murders that have happened and as soon as it hits 12am, Character is shown with a grin.

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